Hello, boys and girls!
After a long process of very careful and deep thinking, here are the results. It has been a very tough decision, mainly due to the fact that there have only been TWO entries, but the winner will get his or her prize anyway.
I am going to copy both of them here just as they come, with only minor changes to help understanding. You are free to make any corrections in your comments, but please be respectful with your classmates.
IN THE SUN... by Yesuenesis Rodríguez Gómez
Once upon a time in a beautiful shining country there was a nice old couple who liked to live in the sun. Michael and Ada were not too old, but quite old to need some help at home.
So, thinking about it, they put an advertisement in a popular newspaper. Many women responded to the advert, but they chose a nice young Transylvanian girl in her thirties.
One day the couple got ill with flu and they asked the girl. Martha, to stay for the night.
Michael and Ada used to have a cat that disappeared in the dark outside the house.
One night with no moon, Ada was walking in the garden when she stepped on something that kept her attention, one little ear appeared from the land. She started digging and her cat was there. She screamed and screamed so Martha heard her and she came to help her.
Ada needed to have a cup of tea to relax. A night after, Michael, Ada and Martha were watching television and suddenly they heard a scratch on the door, they thought it was the wind and did not care.
Strange things started happening, one meow here, one strange small, but they did not care, they only wanted to sunbathe in the terrace.
But one raining night with full moon, (yes, it sometimes rains), the couple listened to Martha's screams, they went to see her and she confessed that she killed the cat and the spirit of the cat went every night to her bedroom and tried to attack her. She pulled her sleeves up and showed them her injuries. They were shocked, but when Michael and Ada were coming back to their bedroom in panic, something attacked them from behind, threw them to the floor and killed them.
The police found the bodies on the floor the next week.
But how many bodies? ...?
HALLOWEEN STORY by Oriana López Loureiro.
Once upon a time in a small town in the North of England there were six girls. They worked in a butcher's in the town centre. They were hard workers.
They were known as the witches sisters. During the day, they were normal girls. They went to high school in the morning, and when they finished high school, they started to work in the butcher's.
It was said in town that when a five or six year old boy went into the shop, that boy disappeared mysteriously. The witches hid the boys until the people stopped looking for the boys. Meanwhile, at nights, the witches cut the boys in small pieces because they made potions in order to be young forever.
In Halloween night, some boys disappeared because the sisters kidnapped them while they entered the butcher's to ask for sweets.
After some time, the butcher's was abandoned because the six sisters died, the new owner of the shop found human bones.
DEAD!
And the winner is...
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... Oriana López Loureiro!
Congratulations! You will receive your prize in the first lesson after the English exam.
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